Thread:Sumwan/@comment-45094136-20200225221903/@comment-35303705-20200226102819

I'm not sure about calling it a "forlorn village", since it's really only called a "lovely little village" by Salubra. I think just calling it "village" or maybe just "abandoned village" is more accurate. Perhaps discuss it in the wiki's discord server too, people there might have some better ideas.

I also don't think it's necessary to mention how many enemies are in this area, since the special rooms sections usually just describe the area and the NPCs.

Also perhaps you could mention Salubra's dialogue somewhere, not this exact dialogue obviously, but you can mention what the village was like in the past when it was still alive:

"Did the townsfolk out there tell you to come and visit me? Mmm, yes! This is a lovely little village isn't it? Warm and intimate and full of life."