Thread:ColdWhie/@comment-45094136-20200228020100

heyo, since I have little to no personal life I was looking over all the articles I edited and saw you edited my forgotten crossroads one, the one with the Desolate Village. I wanted to know what to improve on (Grammer/Spelling/Wording), so what would you suggest I do/avoid in future articles I edit to make them better? 